I’m posting stories in progress here to get feedback from people on what is good, what is confusing, what works and what doesn’t.  Please be brutal and honest with your feedback, it’s the only way my stories (and me as a writer) will get any better.

Thanks for reading, it means a great deal to me that you’d spend your time looking through my words.

Short Stories

Friday Fictioneers


Left Hand Way (working title)

Justin, a high school senior in Seattle, has his world thrown into turmoil when his father goes missing.  Justin and his mother struggle to keep the family business afloat while searching for answers.  Soon Justin is contacted by a mysterious man promising help, only to be drawn into an underground world that is strange and dangerous.  Justin will discover things about his family and about himself, and he will find answers, but they may not be the answers he expects.

Act 1

Act 2

Act 3


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